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This essay has caused me considerable difficulty to
be honest. I have had a harder time writing this than any other assignment.
While writing this essay, I have read several critiques of the book from
different viewpoints, looked up various options for what view to write from and
spent many hours going back over the book and my other sources. Revising this
paper has become a particularly laborious task. Rewording things to make more
sense, finding the best way to say what I am trying to say without using first
or second person, and generally trying to get everything into cohesive form.
I tend to revise most of my writing, as things don’t
always translate properly from thinking to writing so I find that one revision
or more help make the writing better understood. The few times that I have not
revised my papers I have noticed a distinct decline in the quality of what I
write.
For this essay specifically I have revised it many
times, from the very first paragraph written and throughout the writing
process. I would get a paragraph written and find that it either didn’t flow
into a cohesive paragraph, or that I had not transferred my thoughts properly.
I plan to continue to revise this to the best of my abilities so that the paper
is the best I can make it.
This website helped me with the angles needed for revision of an essay.
Hopefully there aren't many people that are having
as much of a difficult time as I am. Good luck everyone, and have a great
summer break.
I feel you. At fist I though that it was going to be very simple but I was wrong I felt that I had so much to said and next thing you know I felt that I was repeating myself over and over again. I this essays like this ones are the special ones who need extra revision.
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